I think we can all agree that retconning is bad. We have been there, covered that. Time to move on.
Now, how do we avoid retconning?
I have been putting some thought into this recently. As a writer, I understand how easy it can be to let details slip or lose track of where a particular plot thread was going. As the story grows and morphs, and you move beyond the first draft, things can get lost.
The one I am currently working on has gone through some drastic changes, and it includes possible character name changes part of the way through the book. I’ve trimmed down my cast of characters quite a bit, but there is still a lot to keep track of.
So here are a few things I am going to do to keep my story straight.
Note: there are wonderful programs, such as Scrivner, that help with this but as I do not have any such program, my suggestions will reflect this.
Plot, plot, plot
You may be thinking “duh, we all know how to plot.” Hear me out.
I’ve mentioned before that my current project has gone through a lot of changes. When starting on the most recent draft/iteration, I created a detailed plot outline detailing my idea. Then I talked through the plot with my friend, resulting in some of those points being changed.
I then went back and reworked the plot outline. Its a goal of mine to always have an up-to-date plot outline. The practice may seem like a waste of time, but as your story changes adjusting your outline can help you easier keep track of the current plot.
Also, by intentionally plotting things out ahead of time and throughout the process, this could help you create a smoother, more coherent plot.
It is easy enough to do and will save you a lot of trouble in the long run.
When in doubt, leave it out
Perhaps “keep it vague” is a better way to phrase it.
A writer decides far into the story that they want to do something with a character or the plot that differs from their original plan. They have not built up to this in any way, and chances are they have already hinted that things were going to go differently.
I know I have seen it before and I am pretty sure you have too, at least once. It is super annoying and has a nasty habit of ruining whatever impact that moment might have had.
If you aren’t sure where you want to go with something, keep it vague. Don’t give any direct answer as to which way it could go. Even better, leave hints that it could go either way. By leaving it vague or uncertain as to which way something could go, you make the reveal of the truth that much more rewarding.
It can also give you time to consider why you are thinking about doing whatever it is. If it is important to the plot, great. If it is for shock value, maybe reconsider. But that is a topic for another time.
Make a cheat sheet
This relates back to the first point about keeping an up-to-date plot outline.
Odd names for people and places. Important objects that exchange ownership. Convoluted plot threads. If there is a chance you could forget or lose track of things in your story, consider creating a cheat sheet.
Keep records of your characters, how to spell their names, their backstories, how they are related to the others. Write down what they look like and make notes of when that might have changed.
Trace the ownership of important items and note what was going on when they changed hands.
Use the highlighter to visually mark important events and add them to your cheat sheet.
Yes, tools like Scrivener make this much easier, but there are ways to function without them. Use whatever tools you have at your disposal to keep your story straight.
Get more eyes
Lastly, it helps a lot to have a second pair of eyes. Get a friend or someone you trust to read over your work.
I know you have spent hours upon hours pouring over your work. That is part of the problem. You are so familiar with every single word that you are bound to miss things. By having someone who has never seen it before (that may or may not already know the story), you are increasing the likelihood of catching any slip-ups.
I have done this for friends before and helped catch some name mix-ups as well as things that were not made clear. It can be hugely beneficial and, by giving it to a friend, you know you can trust their advice. Also, they are less likely to tear your work into tiny little pieces.
Now, this doesn’t mean that you don’t need to hire an editor. Those are needed too.
Hopefully, you will find these tips and tricks useful when tackling your next literary adventure.
Next week we are going to be tackling one of my favorite questions and the uncertainty it can cause.
As always if you have any questions or comments, leave them down below. I am always looking for new topics to cover!